some. H. L. Mencken, who had lauded This Side of Paradise as the âbest American novel I have seen of late. . . . A truly amazing first novelâoriginal in structure, extremely sophisticated in manner, and adorned with a brilliancy that is as rare in American writing as honesty is in American statecraft,â wrote acerbically of Flappers and Philosophers âin the very magazine ( The Smart Set ) in which he had first published two stories from the collectionâthat it âoffers a sandwich made up of two thick and tasteless chunks of Kriegsbrod with a couple of excellent sardines between.â No doubt Mencken believed the âsardinesâ to be the Smart Set stories, âBenedictionâ and âDalyrimple Goes Wrong.â Playing upon the fresh memories of a recent world war, Mencken opined further that such stories as âThe Offshore Pirateâ offered âthin and obvious stuffâin brief, atrociously bad stuff,â and rhetorically shook his head at âthe sagacity of a publisher who lets a young author print âFlappers and Philosophersâ after âThis Side of Paradise.â If it were not two years too late Iâd almost suspect a German plot.â
Other critics were equally unforgiving. The Nationâs reviewer wrote that the stories of Flappers and Philosophers âhave a rather ghastly rattle of movement that apes energy and a hectic straining after emotion that apes intensity. The surface is unnaturally taut; the substance beneath is slack and withered.â The critic for the Chicago Evening Post lamented, âIt seems a pityâ that Fitzgeraldâs considerable talent âis expended, for the most part, on themes of such slight importance.â Moralizing about the dangers of the literary marketplace, the Baltimore Evening Sun reviewer, unfavorably comparing Fitzgeraldâs collection of stories to This Side of Paradise (âundoubtedly one of the best works of fiction published in America in the past yearâ), suggested that Flappers and Philosophers âmust have been written specially to please those people whose hobby it is to harp on the harmfulness of praise and early success to an artist, emphasizing the theory that only in penury and neglect can a man do good work.â
Yet if some critics argued that Fitzgeraldâs stories provided evidence of his pandering to success, others clearly viewed them as signs of Fitzgeraldâs emergence as an important new author. Heywood Broun, who contended with Mencken as one of the leading critical voices of the day, grudgingly admired some of the stories in the New York Tribune Review , admitting that despite ânot having liked This Side of Paradise â and thus âprepared to find confirmation for everything we thought and said about the novel in the new collection of short stories,â a story like âThe Ice Palaceâ convinced him that Fitzgerald âdid have something to say and knew how to say it,â and that he âmay yet find a powerful springboard and go on to write something which will make us eat all the prophecies we have ever made about him.â Less ambivalently, if petulantly, the reviewer for the New York Herald wrote that in the stories Fitzgeraldâs âfaculty of characterizing people in a sentence in a way to make one thank Heaven one is not related to them; his facility in the use of the limited but pungent vocabulary of his type; his ingenuity in the hatching of unusual plots, all point to a case of cleverness in its most uncompromising form.â
In stark contrast to Mencken, the reviewer for the San Francisco Chronicle claimed that âFlappers and Philosophersâ marks the conversion of F. Scott Fitzgeraldâs undisciplined and turbid genius of âThis Side of Paradiseâ into a bridled and clarified talent.â Fanny Butcher, writing for the Chicago Sunday Tribune , viewed Flappers and Philosophers as
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